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In his book, The Art of Travel, Alain de Botton introduces the 19th century art critic, painter, and educator John Ruskin. Born in 1819, Ruskin was a complex character, who was passionate about teaching people how to draw (he wrote the book, The Elements of Drawing). His goal was not that they should become excellent draw-ers, but that they would learn to see. To model this, Ruskin created “word paintings” about what he saw. For our purposes, we’ll create “word paintings” with photographs.
We were all, Ruskin argued, able to turn out adequate word paintings. A failure was only the result of not asking ourselves enough questions, of not being more precise in analyzing what we had seen and felt. ~ Alain de Botton, The Art of Travel
Here’s an example of one of Ruskin’s word paintings.
Dawn purple, flushed, delicate. Bank of grey cloud, heavy at six. Then the lighted purple cloud showing through it, open sky of dull yellow above – all grey, and darker scud going across it obliquely, from the southwest, moving fast, yet never stirring from its place, at last melting away. It expands into a sky of brassy flaked light on grey – passes away into grey morning. ~ Ruskin, The Art of Travel
Like haiku, word paintings are literal reflections of what we see, just longer in length. Ruskin said that word paintings should not only describe what something looks like, but also how it makes us feel, as well as its psychological value and importance to us. Ideally, we would write a word painting before we take the photograph, however, if the experience is still fresh in our minds, it can be done after the fact.
Here’s an example from a winter photograph.
Outside my front door is a sea of white covering everything in its path. I notice the branches of the trees, which only yesterday seemed like a chaotic jumble, but now stand out with their fresh coat of snow. The lack of wind keeps the snow snugly in place. The temperature is milder than it’s been all week. Everything, including me, is getting a little reprieve from the bitter cold and seems to be celebrating. The branches on this particular tree reach out in both directions as if they are embracing winter. The beauty of this winter white wonderland takes my breath away. I stop to appreciate the scene, knowing it won’t last long.
Try writing a word painting (in your head or on paper) the next time something stops you in wonder.
Articles on Ruskin
Mike Leigh and Emma Thompson have got him all wrong (via The Guardian)
I love the idea of word paintings. I must try it out and see where it leads me. Your Sky Painting inspires me to invent stories! Lots of lovely links to follow here, Kim. Thank you! Have a happy weekend.
Have to totally agree with Sandra’s comments…thanks for all the links…I believe I’ve mentioned…unable to take the course this time due to other courses I’m in the middle of…and lots of travel…but will look forward to your round 2! Thanks again for all the info.