“I realized that learning to comment on my work not only made my work more effective but it also helped me understand my work better and solve certain creative challenges. In fact, I realized that there are many types of writing and many uses for writing. Writing is now an integral part of my creative process from start to finish. Making the Visual Verbal is a useful skill that can benefit everyone, including you.” ~ John Paul Caponigro via Scott Kelby
In my workshops, I encourage participants to write about their photographs in the image description – what they saw, how it made them feel, and how they composed accordingly.
This is not easy to do.
So, I was intrigued when I heard about the 1K Photography Blogging Challenge at Photography Marketing Masters (Note: the original post is no longer there). Nigel Merrick said that if a picture is worth a thousand words, then we should be able to write a thousand words about them.
I decided to take the challenge with the image above, taken on a trip to Newfoundland earlier this year. Now, let me first say that writing does not come easily for me. I’m a woman of few words in person and on paper. After several attempts, I still haven’t been able to get to the 1,000 word mark; I’m at just over 700.
However, it was a very worthwhile writing exercise and I wanted to let you know about it in case you wanted to give it a try. Writing takes practice.
A Foggy Day in Tilting
We woke to the coldest day of the trip so far, and dense fog too. Even though it was late June, we knew that the weather could be unpredictable on this island of rock in the Atlantic Ocean.
I was on a long-awaited trip with two long-time friends to the only province in Canada I’d not yet visited – Newfoundland. One of my friends has family ties there and had spent time working on Fogo Island, where we were staying.
She was our guide and insisted on visiting the town of Tilting, which is a National Historic Site. That’s where we were headed that cool morning. We put on our layers, gloves and hats and set out in the car for the twenty minute drive.
Newfoundland has a strong Irish and fishing heritage. A few hundred years ago, Europeans made seasonal trips across the pond to fish for cod. Eventually, many of those Europeans migrated to Newfoundland (a British colony at the time) to fish year-round.
“It was fish that brought Europeans to Newfoundland, it was fish that dictated the pattern of their settlement, and it was the catching, salting, drying and marketing of fish that laid down the forms and structures of the society they built.” ~ Newfoundland and Labrador Heritage
Fishing was a way of life for Newfoundlanders for hundreds of years until a moratorium on cod fishing began in 1992, due to the overfishing of the area. While fishing is still part of the Newfoundland economy, it is no longer a growing industry.
Tilting was one of the first places where migratory fishermen stopped. It became a mostly Irish settlement and is home to possibly the oldest exclusively Irish cemetery in North America.
Our first stop at Tilting was at this rocky bay. The fog was still thick and the town seemed frozen in time. Since being named a historic site, many of the old buildings and red fishing “stages” have been restored.
These “stages” are where the fish are processed for salting and drying, and they are prevalent throughout the province. The fog showcased them beautifully. I wondered if they were painted red for this very reason, to be seen in the often foggy days from the fishing boats.
I was struck by how the restored building was surrounded by symbols of decay – the two upside-down fishing boats and the snow fence. I composed so that the “fishing stage” was in the upper right third of the frame, on a diagonal, so that the two upside down boats formed a triangle with the building. The eye is led around this triangle, and not out of the frame, giving a sense of stillness rather than movement. If I were to compose differently, I would probably pull back a little, leaving a little more space around the triangle, especially on the left side.
I loved how the boats were left out in the yard to decay. They symbolize the old way of life, and act as a kind of memorial to days gone by, even though time marches on. They had a sense of dignity to them.
The foggy background gives context – the bay, the rock, a weathered and broken down fence, and the small homes of the town of Tilting – yet, being veiled somewhat, they take a back seat to the building and the boats. I wondered who still lived in this town and what they did for a living.
Outside of the frame were well-preserved saltbox homes, the Irish cemetery, and a small museum (with no one in attendance), open to anyone who passed by. We wandered around a pebble beach and looked for heart-shaped stones. We saw a farm with horses and snowmobiles in the yard. There were very few people out on this chilly morning, although we did meet one man named Foley. That name goes back to the original settlers in this area, and there is an operating Bed and Breakfast Inn called Foley’s Place.
The serenity, the beauty, and the history of this place was breathtaking. And, the cool air literally made me catch my breath as I stood on the rocks at the edge of the bay.
All in all, this was one of my favourite images from the trip because it points to the essence of Newfoundland in one tiny frame – the ruggedness of the rocky land and the people, the reliance on water and fish, and the preservation of the past and a simpler way of life.
Related Reading
Practice writing about your photographs in the visual journaling workshop, Once Upon a Time: Photographs have Stories to Tell, facilitated by me and Sally Drew.
A Novel look at how Stories may Change the Brain
10 National Geographic Photographers Give Thanks for the Photos that Changed Them
A worthy exercise that I need to study in more depth. I find it very difficult to verbalize the impact of my images.
I do too, Brenda. It will be my focus next year – not 1,000 words, though.
You’ve done so well writing about that lovely photo you took when visiting Newfoundland! I have to say that I do enjoy writing and always have, even as a young teenager. I can even tend to be a little wordy – my email correspondents could vouch for that! However, on my blog, I prefer to mostly go the other way and put in as little text as is possible, with short paragraphs, wanting my photography to do most of the talking.
When I encounter very long texts, I have to admit that I sometimes tend to skim them. I guess the secret is to stay in a happy medium!
Thank you, Sandra. And, I agree this is not something I’ll do often, but learning to articulate what a photograph is saying to me seems a worthwhile exercise.
Thank you for the encouragement to continue telling my stories with photos. I know that’s a little different from your message about telling the story of the photo, but this was meaningful for me. I tend to be very sparse with words and perhaps I should be more generous with the background of the photo.
I also loved your story about Newfoundland. It added significant texture to the photo and you’ve just re-enforced why Newfoundland has been on my must-go list for a long time.
Joanne, thanks for being here and commenting. Yes, I think our photographs should tell the story. Maybe writing can help us clarify our work.
Providing context on a photograph like mine above is helpful sometimes. I do hope you get to Newfoundland.
I enjoy writing about my photos on my blog, as well as doing sort of photo essays where the photos illustrate what I’m writing about. But 1,000 words about one photo…that would be hard! I don’t think I have that much to say!
Yes, super hard. I couldn’t do it (or I should say, it would take a little more work to do it). There are some examples on the 1K blogging challenge site that are very well done and make it look easy.
Writing a 1000 words sounds daunting to me too. I struggle with writing, but remind myself that I will get better with practice. Your essay gives your photo a lot of context — the story was very interestiing.
Thank you, Gina. I stopped at 700 because I thought I’d said all I could say and adding more words would just have been fluff.
I think you have done a magnificent job – you bring the reader into the experience emotionally by sharing the adventure was with your friends, you shared the history of the location and also the experience through the eye of the photographer. A good exercise indeed, though to Sandra’s point – 1,000 words is quite a lot to describe what a photo visually depicts as well. I love that you always push past your comfort zone in an effort to epand your horizons. Inspiring.
First, I love this image! Second, I love reading why you took this photo, where you were and awhy, the history behind this area, and what you might change. It’s like a “behind the scenes” peek! This would be a very difficult task for me, but one I might just tackle!
No matter the number of words, your description just brings the whole image to life for me. I can feel the chill in the air and smell the sea. A lovely exercise, and one I will check into myself.